What did you already attempt to get your problem solved?
Many of your emails were WAY too long. At the very least, break up your email into multiple paragraphs.
FORMATTING
Paragraphs do NOT get indented in emails. Skip a line between paragraphs.
The body of the email should be BELOW the greeting with a line skipped between.
I got WAY too many emails without a subject line- this shows a lack of attention to detail and not enough professionalism. While we're at it, the subject lines need to be more descriptive.
If you have an auto-signature, you do NOT need to sign your name at the bottom- that just leads to your name being there twice.
OTHER
Address a specific person if possible, if not, use "To Whom It May Concern" or "Culver's Management"- do not just say "Dear Culver's"; the company is not a person. You could also just say "Hello".
Don't tell them how to run their business.
Don't put employee names in parentheses.
Objectives:
Identify real-world examples of violations of consumer rights